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Let me have a go at the current rules of:

In: computer hardware, computer software, or personal and home computer networking.

Out: electronic devices, media players, cell phones or smart phones or game consoles, except insofar as they interface with your computer.

I would suggest something like:

In: Computer technology and computer hardware, software, networking and auxiliary devices, but only in relation to end-users.

Out: Special-purpose electronic devices such as media players, phones and game consoles, except when networked to computers or running a general-purpose operating system (such as routers or Embedded Windows).

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